You guys really know how to play in the second dimension

Thanks for everyone's opinions, I decided to make a correction!

Everyone talked a lot about the previous single chapter, and I also read it.

This book started with the chapter on Yu Ji, and at the same time, after the end of Touching Yu, the grades started to drop.

I summed it up, and there are three main failings: first, hiding the heroine, second, lack of interaction, and third, not being enough of a charlatan.

In fact, the reason why I hid Yu Jixue was because I was afraid that I would not write well. I wanted to show it off at the critical moment so that I could grasp it. But maybe I used too much force and hid it for too long. This reminded me of In some of the books I read in the past, my favorite plot was the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. I would get annoyed whenever the damn author made the heroine invisible. As a result, it was my turn to write it myself, and I became that damn author. It's true that Yu Ji succeeds and loses.

Secondly, the interaction aspect is getting worse and worse, because I am also struggling with whether I should have a single heroine or a harem. On the one hand, I want to be single Yuji, and on the other hand, I think about the harem. Due to my indecision, I dare not do more. Write.

The last part is the satirical part. This book was full of satirical flavor at the beginning. As a result, by the end of the book, the satirical plots became less and less interesting, and naturally it was not interesting enough.

Think about it carefully, why should I hide Yu Ji?

Not long after this book was published, FGO 2.3 came out, the Great Qin chapter came out, and Moon Yu Ji came out. Then because of the vertical painting, the voice, the handsome Noble Phantasm, and all kinds of things, I fell in love with Yu Ji out of control, so I changed the originally planned plot and wrote the Da Qin volume.

That's right, the Da Qin volume was not originally part of the plan. This volume has only one purpose, and that is Yu Ji.

As a result, I wrote it, and the response was good. Everyone also liked Yu Ji. However, I was worried that Hou Xu would not be well written, so I hid her...

What the hell am I doing?

My grades dropped so much that I didn’t even react.

Looking back now, it was the stupidest move.

change! Complete change! Change the plot and everything!

Although I don’t know if it’s too late to change now, but no matter what, I will return to my original intention and write about my Yu Ji, my interactions, and my sand sculptures!

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