Warhammer: In the Name of Nirvana

One so far...Writing afterthoughts

First, let me tell you something fun.

That is, in fact, at the very beginning of the article, my setting of Lao Eleven here was very, very simple: I just set him as an incompetent original body who led his own legion to be lured deep into the Randan Empire. , and then killed them directly, and the legion was destroyed.

Later, I felt that this setting was a bit insulting to the original body: even Konrad should not be so embarrassed, so I strengthened him by 100 million points, and then Old Eleven 2.0 became a much-anticipated character. [The Perfect One] (Mainly because I heard a speculation at the time that there was a warmaster before Horus)

Then, considering that he became the erased original body, he must have committed something outrageous and resentful, so Old Eleven 3.0, also known as [Menger], was officially born. At that time, I was very concerned about Old Eleven. The setting of Eleven is: a flesh-and-blood reformer who cooperates with aliens, and then is betrayed by his alien advisors during the war with Ran Dan.

Yes, until this time, Old Eleven was a disgrace.

But after a while...

As the plot progressed little by little, I suddenly had an idea. This idea mainly came from the fact that I happened to play a game module called TNO, and there was a character in this module named: Heydrich.

One thing to say is that the timeline of Heydrich shooting the sun made me fall in love with him immediately, so the idea of ​​​​playing some Dianhao content surged in my mind: So after several revisions and reasoning, our current old ten One 4.0 [Heydrich] was born.

Who would have thought that in the beginning he was a disgraceful thing who was defeated and died...

In fact, until I wrote the plot of the death of Old Eleven, I had been adjusting and improving the image of this character, which indeed made the plot seem very dragging. Mainly because one of my writing habits is "a flash of inspiration", whether it was originally Emperor Ran Dan and the current Lao Eleven were both the product of several flashes of inspiration.

Another writing habit is that I like to constantly make patches to improve a story as completely as possible from all aspects, and add a little rhetoric if possible: many readers should be very clear about this. When I write an article, I really like to add a prefix to each paragraph. Every time I vow to change this habit, it never works (face covering)

The result is procrastination: To be honest, I am quite helpless. Sometimes I often think to myself how on earth I wrote these plots to more than two million words, and then I have a deep self-doubt (the group in the book club group) Friends should be able to testify for me that my heart is broken and I get angry once every two to three days on average.)

Another point is actually the influence of accidents and daily factors. For example, Lao Shiyi should have died at the end of last month, but I had a high fever at the end of the month. My condition in those two days was so bad that I didn’t even know what happened to me. I was writing something, so I put it off.

However, after killing Old Eleven, this problem should have been alleviated: mainly because there are no big plot points in the following, it is just the return of King Slash and Crow King, and the incident of Perfect City, and then it is almost to the end of the Great Crusade It’s a series of bad things, but I think the overall style can still be kept a little more relaxed.

Next, I decided to shift the focus of the article to the interaction between Morgan and other primarchs: for example, Angel, this popular character did not appear normally at all. If the next plot is written about Morgan's travels on Terra, it should be able to make Horus And Angel has officially made his debut.

By the way, there is a slight difference from my initial overdue statement: because Morgan, a bad woman, has become a bit of a good person, angels are no longer in the position of being those who unlock the heart. Our Saint Gilles and Morgan both have a relationship that's more like...

…

Plastic sisters?

Adding a silly Horus or a similarly plastic but sub-standard Fulgrim in the middle is simply perfect.

Well, those are the main things. Next, I will answer the questions I saw in the comment area and other posts (I have already said that if you have any questions, just ask them and I will pay attention to them)

First of all, there is the problem of war scenes: I am indeed not good at war scenes and battle scenes, but everyone knows that Warhammer is nothing if it doesn’t use Tata. So I can only bite the bullet and write it to find the feeling. However, Facts have proved that it is still... not very successful.

Hmm... I will learn my lesson in the future and try to avoid this problem. In fact, I don't really want to write the war scene of Lao Eleven, but this boss has been prepared for so long, and it would be really hard not to write an earth-shattering ending to him. There is a feeling that it is unfinished and I have to hold on to write.

Although it still seems to be unfinished...

So as mentioned before, I plan to shift the focus of the plot to other Primarchs and write a family ethics drama honestly (but if the characters of each Primarch are to be written clearly, it is not much simpler than war)

The second problem is that of Zhuang Sen.

It is obvious to everyone that Jonson is definitely the first supporting character in this book: I would like to add a word here, in fact, I originally positioned the Lion King as a second-line supporting character. Who still remembers that I said at the end of the first volume that I would write it? What about the Lion King? At that time, I thought that it would be a great success if I could make Morgan's status in the Lion King's heart second only to Coswayen.

The result...

A flash of inspiration... It's all a flash of inspiration...

Then, the Lion King of the Great Crusade is actually a very interesting character: this guy is both stylish and comic, jumping left and right between a reliable destroyer and a double act of the Second Empire, plus a spoonful of incomprehension. , one thing to say, I once almost failed to write The Lion King, but I finally braked at the corner of The Death of Old Eleven, and I managed to preserve a little bit of The Lion King’s character.

The current Lion King is actually more difficult to write than the original guy: he has to be both reliable and interesting at the same time, and at the same time, he has to make a little improvement without changing his explosive character on the basis of his original lack of understanding of people's hearts. If anything, this guy's character would lose more than half of his charm.

By the way, there is another question about the Lion King and the Warmaster: In fact, up to now, there are only three people who can use the word Warmaster to tease the Lion King, and Alpha counts half of them. This is what he did in the original book. , Leman Russ is also considered one, but the Wolf King himself is very shrewd, and the rest is Morgan, but this depends more on Morgan's position in the Lion King's heart.

Until now, the Lion King is actually not a complete demon with the Warmaster. Morgan can tease the Lion King with the Warmaster because her name is Morgan. Except for Morgan, other people’s interactions with the Lion King rarely involve the Warmaster: just Like when Conrad persuaded the Lion King in the previous pictures, everyone thought he was using Warmaster to persuade, but in fact Conrad came with reason and evidence. The word Warmaster is not such a panacea, even if Warmaster is a Catnip, Lion King is not a real cat either.

Let me make another digression: The Dark Angel Legion here actually has a very good military strength, because according to the information I have reviewed, the Dark Angels had about 60,000 people when they met with Zhuangson, and in the third time, After the Dan War, this number was [not even one out of ten], which was less than six thousand.

And here, under the influence of Morgan, the Dark Angels still have more than 30,000 Terran veterans, and the foundation is still there. I never think that it was the Ran Dan War that defeated the First Legion, but after the Ran Dan War. , Jonson continued the intensive work for another century, and the continuous bloodshed finally brought down the Dark Angel.

But it doesn’t matter, now we have Luther with a stable mentality, Morgan on-demand, and double endorsement of Jonson and the Emperor: Please also witness the rise of the interstellar nation of Caliban, and Jonson is about to join the ranks of the ambitious!

Of course, Siege of Terra also said that the Dark Angels can take out more than 10,000 Terran veterans, so I won’t care about this issue...

There's one last question: the so-called mama's baby of Dawnbreaker.

I have never felt that there are many mommies in the Dawnbreaker Legion who are serious (I am sure). The Dawnbreakers do love Morgan very much, but this does not mean that they are irrational mommies.

The real mama's boy is Kahn's kind who follows him crazy unconditionally, and among the three representative characters in Dawnbreaker: Bayar has the weakest image as a force bearer, and in my impression he has no mama's boy deeds, and Dayan Hector hasn't appeared for a long time (don't rush me, I'll try to get you out right away), but Hector's feelings for Morgan, which I think are the Astartes' feelings for the Primarch, are fine.

Finally, as the Dawnbreaker with the most portrayals, Rana is probably the one who is closest to the setting of Mummy. However, please pay attention to one issue: Rana has never supported any of Morgan's madness without any brain. Whenever Morgan ventures into When he went crazy or chose to drive Tata, Rana was very firm in stopping him. His sanity was always online, unlike Kahn.

If you really want to talk about mom's baby, these three tied up are not as good as Virgo.

In fact, I personally have been avoiding the so-called bad memes. Just like someone said that Ahriman’s Arena of Valor memes were talked about too much, I consciously avoid them, and I will read each post several times. times to grasp the problems in the article (so, if you have any problems, please write them in the post. I am not used to reading the comment area, so just post them. If there are really problems, I will definitely correct them)

Another point is that my writing power is limited after all. Some characters are really impossible to write, such as our most powerful and domineering Brother Dun. Even though I asked Morgan to recruit him, I had no time to write it. he.

I once thought about using the colorful daily activities of the Legion to describe these Astartes soldiers smoothly, but I found that I couldn't write a colorful daily life at all: because I don't have a colorful daily life at all!

(Crying...(*))

Okay, that’s all I want to say now. Thank you to all the book friends who have supported me until now and allowed me to calm down and continue writing my book. This is the first time I have written such a long book. , there must be many problems, which can only be discovered and improved little by little.

In addition, I am also thinking that after writing so many war scenes, I personally really want to open two extra games: I have been very fond of activities such as encore recently, and I have had a very, very strong idea of ​​​​encore.

(But Qidian allows me to write about Anke?)

To put it simply, I’m here to ask everyone’s thoughts: If most book friends don’t object, I would like to write some Anke-type extras, maybe:

The French-style Legiones Astartes and their Primarch Joan of Arc

happy.

Of course, if you want to watch other style extras or have something you want to order, you can also say it in the post: I may write some extras in the next one to two days, but it will not exceed two days at most. This is to adjust the mood that is breaking down as I write now, and it will not affect the rest of the text.

Finally, I added the book group number again: 684947131 (for practical reasons, I am more impressed by the suggestions in the group, feel free to join, I have just upgraded the number of people in the group recently (˙▽˙))

Anyway, that’s it. Today’s update is relatively early, so there’s no burden. If the response is good, I’ll start preparing a sequel~

*. (ˊωˋ*)*.