After this testimonial, the new book is open!
When knocking down the finale, there was too much reluctance in my heart.
There are many, many characters in this book, all of which I typed out with my hands, as if they were living in that world, and I couldn’t bear to end them in my heart.
But the story is here, and it should end.
At the beginning, the book has two main lines, the thief line and the daily line.
I originally planned to write the two lines at the same time, but the author is too young and has insufficient pen power to control it.
In the Penglaijian story, the line of thief ends hastily.
After this line is over, it comes to the line of Mistress Da Ma. When it is completely deciphered, the story of the book is over.
Several fatal mistakes were made in the process of writing.
It is that the characters are portrayed too thinly.
Especially the fairy boy, I used a lot of strokes to write about this person, but the protagonist easily killed him in seconds.
The second villain character is unprepared in front, and appears very abruptly.
There is also a fatal disadvantage:
Readers said that they liked to watch daily life. Later, I tended to write daily life. Too much daily life resulted in the slow progress of the plot. After reading too much daily life, it is easy to be aesthetically tired, and follow-up reading is not strong.
After all, I just don’t have a good grasp of this degree.
Lessons must be learned in the next book.
Fortunately, the completion of the book is still acceptable, the holes that should be filled have been filled in, and the writing has been finished.
Try to write better the next one.
Thank you brothers for your support!
End scattered flowers!
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