It Would Be Great If I Could Be a Copywriter

"Every day, every day, the same thing is repeated...extremely boring..."

"This world is decaying..."

The editor-in-chief frowned: "Well, Xinlan, the review belongs to the review, you don't need to read out the content of the comic..."

"Ah! I'm sorry!" Xinlan hurriedly apologized.

In the spacious office, all editors of the first editorial team are conducting cross-examination of the first chapter of "Death Note".

After downloading the drawings, the editor-in-chief began to browse them one by one.

The forty-page plot is not too much, but not too much.

It took ten minutes to read it several times, and the editor was shocked.

The content of the entire first episode is not sloppy. The character of the teacher Mao Xuewang is very online. In just one short beginning, he set an extremely calm and intelligent image for the protagonist, and laid a lot of foreshadowing.

Especially at the end, the protagonist, after experimenting with the authenticity of the death note after killing people, actually decided to become an existence that wipes out all the evils in the dead, and even uses the note to kill all the criminals to create a new world.

"Mr. Mao Xuewang's creativity is too strong." The editor-in-chief praised without hesitation, "The foreshadowing and setting of this first episode is definitely another god-made reservation."

"But the problem is, just looking at the first sentence, you can't see the meaning of suspense at all."

Soon, a cross-reviewed editor made comments.

Indeed, in the setting of Death Note, you can kill people by writing your name, and you can also set the killing process in detail. No matter how you look at it, it is the setting of invincible text.

Speaking of suspense, is it possible that you will let the police catch such a murderer who kills in the air? Forced suspense?

It's impossible, okay?

How could the protagonist of Invincible Man be caught by the police?

On the contrary, this is a bit like some martial arts, the setting of the heroes of the rivers and lakes, the protagonist will kill the wicked according to his own will.

And the suspense seems to be out of reach.

The editor-in-chief also thought of this.

But he was very optimistic about Mao Xuewang before, and now he is definitely willing to trust each other.

So the editor-in-chief pondered and said: "There is indeed this hidden danger, but the first chapter is set very rigorously, very in line with the standards of suspense works, plus the author is Mao Xuewang, so I think we can be right. This work has expectations."

"Then... what do you mean, editor-in-chief? Now it's directly reviewed?"

"Could it be too sloppy?"

"Yes, do we want to try and let Mr. Mao Xuewang revise it again?"

A group of editors twittered.

"No need!" The editor waved a big hand.

"Just go through the review directly, and then arrange the recommendation. With the strength of Teacher Mao Xuewang, no matter how bad it is, it is impossible to collapse."

The powerful voice made the editors look at each other.

Fine.

Anyway, you are the editor-in-chief, so I listen to you.

As a result, the work passed the review at the speed of light, and a wave of enthusiasm was set off in the comic circles on the Internet.

The comment section of "Gianwumei Xiaobui".

"What's the matter, Xiao Mu is so gone?"

"The second day when Xiao Mu is permanently closed, I miss it."

"Does anyone know the address of this dead eunuch? I will send him some souvenirs."

"The previous one should be sent to Xingkong too, right?"

"There is a saying, starry sky b is a real dog. Teacher Mao Xuewang doesn't draw a small burial and it is his pot."

"What about the new pit? Didn't you say that it will be out today?"

"Mao Xuewang ran to paint suspense, and my youth was over."

"Gong Qingjie, climb for the Lord!"

The atmosphere in the entire comment area is very sluggish.

It can be seen that after the permanent suspension of Xiaomu, the readers are more or less grieved.

then.

Suddenly someone refreshed the page of Xia Mao Xuewang's works.

Then I saw one more work displayed in the background.

"Death Note"!

That person came to the spot excitedly for a laser dance, and quickly reminded everyone in the comment area of ​​Xiaobui.

"Look, everyone! Teacher Mao Xuewang's new work has been reviewed!"

"Fuck, I really have!"

"The first chapter of Death Note is out!"

"I finally waited for you, but fortunately I didn't give up."

"Where is it? Why didn't I see it?"

"Idiot, you can just refresh it."

"Oh oh."

The comment area immediately boiled again.

The brother whose youth had ended just now, he could do it faster than anyone else, he couldn't wait to open the first chapter of "Death Note" and read it with relish.

After the brother frowned and watched it, he wanted to come out and grab the first place in the sofa, but he didn't expect that the comment area was already overcrowded.

Below a lot of readers who have completed the test are bubbling to sign in.

The speed of this kind of heat increase is ridiculously nm!

"This first sentence is really good! It's just too little to read."

"The previous, forty pages is not enough. You didn't expect me to see it."

"The style has changed too much. Is it really okay for Teacher Mao Xuewang?"

"Well, it's very different from the previous one, but it's still pretty."

"Mr. Mao Xuewang's creativity is against the sky 666"

"No one really thinks Mao Xuewang can't draw suspense, right? No, no?"

"This is amazing at the beginning! The setting of Death Note is too awesome~www.novelmtl.com~ Someone discussed the plot and said: "Uh, is this work suspenseful? When the protagonist gets the notes, isn't he invincible? Where is the suspenseful plot? "

Many people responded and participated in the discussion of the plot.

"Indeed, this start was too dreamy. With the double quotient as high as Ye Shenyue, and the death note can kill people in the air, I don't know what the subsequent plot can draw."

"Maybe the police caught him?"

"Police? Impossible. Ye Shenyue is so incomprehensible. The police can't catch him at all. Even if they do, there is no evidence."

"One said and one is true. People just write a few words in the notes. Is it possible that writing is illegal?"

"I like Ye Shenyue's character, IQ Online is clear-headed, and looks very comfortable."

"This comic is good at the beginning, but can the follow-up author manage the plot?" Someone worried.

"That depends on how high Mr. Mao Xuewang's double quotient is 2333"

Of course, in addition to these fairly normal comments, there are many others who expressed regret in the death note comment area.

"I have been raising my child for half a month, and then I came back and told me that the issue was permanently closed. I was stupid.

"The crispness of this cut book is decisively scary."

"Could you continue to draw a small burial? The death note is really nonsensical."

"I only love small burial! If you don't draw small burial, your ticket is gone!"

However, when Su Chen saw these comments, he didn't panic at all.

Because the backstage clearly showed that these grieving little readers all voted very honestly.

Especially the reader who threatened that your vote was gone, cast eight votes in the backstage at one go!

Alas, old arrogant.

It's so cute.

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