Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei returns from Sekiro

The main plot is finished, but there are still some things I want to write that have not been finished, so it is not a final statement yet.

What I want to write about is the married life of Eli Yi and Lu Mingfei, which has hardly been written about, as well as the Shura field between Chu Zihang, Xia Mi, and Su Qian, the wedding of the two brothers of the Yuan family, Chang Queen Constantine's Master of Cooking and his ambiguous relationship with Miss Su Enxi, the encounter with Old Tang, the recognition of Mai and Aki's sisters, the life of Fenrir who became a puppy dragon, and the treatment of the black snake The way, the ending of Angers, Lu Mingfei’s parents holding their grandson, the wedding of Caesar and Nono, some follow-up of Sekiro, etc., that’s all I can think of for now, maybe I will add some things to the ending. I’ll add some things, but maybe I won’t, because thinking about this kind of plot is really tiring.

All of these will be combined into a stage of "Talk in the future", but the content of this part will not be too much. They are all scattered little plots, so I want to wait until I finish collecting these little tails before writing the final words.

I promise that we will try our best to release the welfare extra episode before the end of this month.

I must admit that I had the urge to catch up in the later period, mainly about dragon slaying and war. In fact, it was not what I wanted to write about at all.

"Dragon" itself is a capricious romance novel. In fact, most readers don't care about the settings of Dragons or the Black King. They are too far away from reality.

Recently, I have been reading Jiangnan's new books, and the more I read, the more I understand one thing. When I read Dragon Clan, I just want to read about the emotional lives of the characters I like, and I don't want to read about a strictly logical setting.

In fact, the visual sense of Jiangnan's new book is stronger than before, but the emotions are not so easy for people to relate to.

Looking back at the beginning of Long One and Long Two, they are all ordinary scenes that can be seen everywhere in our lives.

The most touching thing about Long San is one sentence: "Sakura is the best."

I can understand Jiang Nan’s feeling of being unable to hold back his thoughts. Dragon Clan is just hard to wrap up.

After writing the wedding of Lu Mingfei and Eli Yi, I actually have a strong desire to skip the Black King directly, go to the timeline where the Black King has been eliminated, write about their married life, and then finish the story. .

But there has to be an ending, so I rushed all the way here and tried my best to fill in all the holes I could. If I couldn’t fill them in, I just passed it carelessly.

The ending was actually changed several times. In the originally expected ending, it was a time loop ending. Old Tang and the resurrected EVA needed to travel to the past to save Lu Mingfei's existence.

This is the reason why Old Tang has always been a baby. He was initially trapped in the Philosopher's Stone because of Lu Mingze's manipulation.

There are some small foreshadowings. For example, when dancing at the Caesar's Ball that night, the street lights outside were flashing. In fact, Eva in the future was sending a signal to Fingel. When Lu Mingfei escaped from the Nordic Bronze Palace, Wei Wan The shock was actually because Old Tang used the Spirit of Words.

There is also Herzog who is trapped in the illusion. The original plan was for him to appear again and then be brutally killed.

Then there will be a plot where Lu Mingfei is sleeping. Several years later, the little fat boy became a technician in Kassel and fought desperately on the battlefield to save the sunset.

There were many other ideas like this that were chopped off and turned into the current version.

While writing this book, I had a big question that remained unanswered.

Lu Mingfei and Eriki are too strong, how should I make them face difficulties?

If you want to write a story, you must encounter difficulties. For example, when I write a wilderness survival novel, the main character’s goal is to return to the human world. If he finds the village along the river all of a sudden, there will be nothing left to do. wrote.

The protagonist cannot achieve his own goals just because he wants to, otherwise the story will become very boring and short.

But Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi are too strong, especially Eri Yi after the blood exchange. I can hardly find a suitable reason to set up obstacles for them.

So we could only find a way to make Lu Mingfei withdraw. The reason why he left for the next two years was to solve this problem.

But Lu Mingfei is the protagonist again. The protagonist has been away for too long and there is not much to see, so it becomes very rushed and ends in a hurry.

After it was over, I was in a very happy state, probably like "Okay, I can finally write what I want to write."

Another problem is Eri. She is a difficult character to grow up because her labels are so rigid. If you remove any one of them, she will not be like her.

But I still wanted her to grow up, so I separated her from Lu Mingfei, whom she relied on, for two years. During these two years, she lived alone, thinking about the person who would touch her head and tell her I love you every day. boy.

I hope she will grow up for Lu Mingfei and have a strong heart even if she is alone.

I must admit that this book has a lot of flaws. In fact, when I first started reading it, it was just an idea. That idea didn't even include Eli Yi until she was picked up by Chen Motong in the movie theater.

When I first opened the book, I was just a Longzuyun reader. Longyi had read half of it, Longer had not read it at all, and Longsan’s notes were vague.

At that time, I had no impression of Nono at all. I just thought she was a rich woman with green tea, so many people said Nono was OOC. When I look at her now, I also think she is OOC.

If I write it again, I won’t let Nono bring the knife to see Lu Mingfei.

But on that afternoon after school, she wore a peaked cap and held two strawberry-flavored ice creams in her hand. While Lu Mingfei was waiting for the bus, she told him that my boyfriend had missed the appointment, and then handed him an ice cream.

She would invite Lu Mingfei to a hot pot restaurant for dinner, then take Lu Mingfei for a walk, make up some sad stories, and go to an alley where a C-level deadpool would appear. Then Lu Mingfei would show off his strength, and finally Nono would show off his strength. Tell him about Cassel and tell him that I actually lied to you. You can take the 100,000 yuan as my compensation for you.

This is what Nono would do.

Up to about Chapter 200, I actually made several mistakes. For example, I mistakenly remembered Susie as a foreigner, and I felt that Eriki actually had a very bad relationship with Minamoto Chisei, and she would never call Minamoto Chisei brother.

Xia Mi, I have no impression at all, so she appeared very late.

After reading dozens of times from Long 1 to Long 5, I finally figured out the personalities of these characters.

And at that time, many scenes could not be written. They came to my mind but could not be described in words. Many times I had to find similar scenes, see how others wrote them and then imitate them.

The part where Ye Sheng proposes was indeed very confusing, because I didn’t know what to write at that time, and I was still frantically making up the original work. After finishing Long San, I found my direction.

This book actually went through a lot of minefields in the early stages, such as inexplicable transitions, strange trials, and OOC characters. However, until the death of Old Tang, I had a great time writing it, so the result is actually the best in the whole book. part.

At that time, I basically updated in the morning and afternoon, because when I had time, I would think about coding and writing, and I was very enthusiastic.

The second best part is from the Dragon Volume Three to the Wedding Volume. I also felt very happy writing here. Facts have proved that when the author feels happy, the written words can make the readers feel happy.

Later, the update was postponed until almost early in the morning, and no updates could be added. The enthusiasm was indeed dampened.

At the end of this year, my skills have improved a lot. I can write out pictures in my mind. I also watched a lot of teachings and read several screenwriting books.

I know that what shapes a character's character is the character's choices, choices based on pressure.

For example, if you want to create a good person, let him not have enough to eat, but still want to share his only remaining bread with the hungry-looking children.

I know the so-called story structure, what a character arc is, and what "rescuing the cat" means.

If I could write it again and make a refined version, I believe it would be much better than the current version.

But forget it, although there are many flaws, this is indeed the first novel of this length that I spent a lot of time and effort on writing.

It allowed me to learn a lot of experience and knowledge. Although it is a fanfic, it is like my child, which I raised every time I pooped.

It taught me a lot and made me realize that writing is something I really like, and while doing what I really like, there is still a group of people who can see what I want to express through it, which is really Very happy.

I write the words, and you can see the YY that originally only existed in my mind, and YY with me, and it can also bring me some benefits.

Oh my god, so many good things have happened to me, I am so lucky!

Thank you very much to all readers for your support.

At the same time, I would like to thank Jiang Nan. No matter what, Jiang Nan has written stories that have touched me many times. It is his painting of Eri that makes us unforgettable. It is also his painting of Xia Mi that makes us understand what blank space is. Girls in all kinds of underwear can really make people cry.

Without him, these characters wouldn't be in our lives at all.

The Dragon Clan in my heart has almost ended here, and I hope to see Jiangnan give the Dragon Clan a suitable ending.

Of course there will be new books, they are already being planned, and I will definitely let everyone know when they are released.

There will still be daily updates for the remaining three days of this month. After all, I still want to have full attendance for a month. The new book will be released to everyone next month. At the same time, it will bring a complete end to this book, which I want to write but have not yet written. Finish writing what comes out.

Above, I wrote a lot more without realizing it. As expected, I really love writing.